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## the fix
-each slide should have one idea and minimal text. if you can't explain the slide in one sentence, it has too much on it. code goes in the demo, not the deck.
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-## see also
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-- [[emphasize-live-demo]] — what to do instead of dense slides
-- [[pitching-matters-as-much-as-product]] — slides should serve the pitch
-- [[jumping-between-features-no-narrative]] — another presentation anti-pattern
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+each slide should have one idea and minimal text. if you can't explain the slide in one sentence, it has too much on it. code goes in the demo, not the deck. [[emphasize-live-demo|emphasize the live demo]] instead — that's where technical work shines. slides should serve the [[pitching-matters-as-much-as-product|pitch]], and without a narrative thread you're just [[jumping-between-features-no-narrative|jumping between features]].
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